Piranesi, so far…

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I commenced reading another LLM book recommendation, Piranesi. I share my thoughts on the first two chapters on my Substack.

Gemini Pro video representation of the sense of Piranesi.

Susanna Clarke’s Piranesi comes in seven parts. I’ve read two. It’s the second of four recommendations an LLM gave me after I fed it ten books and authors I liked enough to inflict on other people. I wrote about that experiment, and about the first book I chose from the list, Jacqueline Harpman’s I Who Have Never Known Men.

I’ll call the parts chapters, because that’s how I read them, and it feels more natural to me. Clarke isn’t here to object, so this unilateral move happens in absentia.

So far the book is mostly world-building. There is a protagonist, Piranesi, a name he’s given and doesn’t seem particularly convinced is his. A second character is known only as the Other and who visits twice a week, enlisting Piranesi’s help in researching the Great and Secret Knowledge, whatever that turns out to be. I’ve spent two chapters trying to decide whether the Other is a foil, a mentor, an antagonist or something else. Please stand by…

Read the rest on Substack.

I Who Have Never Known Men

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I Who Have Never Known Men by Jacqueline Harpman is neither a self-defence of heteronormativity nor a salacious lesbian romp. I finished reading this over the weekend – and again and again – but the Substack essay got out of hand.

The essay is a critique of the book, which I liked very much and recommend highly, but it had some authorial challenges I felt were addressable. My essay is very much critical theory rather than a literary critique.

I took notes in ChatGPT as I read it – par for the course – and I engaged in dialogue afterwards. I wrote the preamble, and then engaged Claude as ChatGPT and I traded ideas. I bounced the outline and some ideas off of Claude. It suggested that each section should rather be a chapter released as a series. In the end, it appears to have been right. Nonetheless, I tasked Claude with the final output.

As I was adding nuance and endnotes, Substack began straining under the weight, so I stopped before something got corrupted. My goal was to provide more context to English-only readers. I added more inline – among en dashes – but I decided to publish it as-is, perhaps editing these clarifications after the fact.

Whitehead, the Electron, and the Persistence of Pattern

These are additional assets related to this Substack post on Alfred North Whitehead’s Science and the Modern World, the chapter on Quantum Theory. It starts like this…

I’ve just finished Whitehead’s chapter on quantum theory in Science and the Modern World. Allowing for the obvious fact that he’s writing from the vantage of 1925, I found this chapter considerably closer to my own way of thinking than some of what preceded it.

What particularly caught my attention was his treatment of the electron.

The classical picture encourages us to imagine a tiny object orbiting a nucleus, rather like a planet around a star. Even when we know that this picture is inadequate, the noun electron still invites us to imagine some enduring thing which persists whilst changing position or state.

Below are summaries in video and podcast format as well as 16 related PDF slides. The fill article is available on my Substack.

French History through Novels

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I was chatting with a French woman, but I only know bits of French history. I’ve read French, English, American, and European history books – and a few others on World History – but what I retain more often comes from novels, and then relating certain periods and monarchs to one another. I asked ChatGPT for a list of books to span this history . Here’s the list. Additional commentary follows.

Historical slotWorkWhat to hang on it
778 / Carolingian mythLa Chanson de RolandCharlemagne, Franks, Christian heroic culture, the legendary France before France
early 1300sMaurice Druon, Les Rois maudits / The Accursed KingsPhilip IV, dynastic succession, England-France entanglement, road towards the Hundred Years’ War
1482Victor Hugo, Notre-Dame de ParisLouis XI, late-medieval Paris, Church, crown, urban society
1572Dumas, La Reine Margot **Catherine de’ Medici, Wars of Religion, St Bartholomew’s Day massacre
1625 onwardDumas, The Three Musketeers*Louis XIII, Richelieu, Anne of Austria, court politics
1660sDumas, The Man in the Iron Masktransition into Louis XIV’s personal rule
1789–94Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities, then Hugo’s Ninety-ThreeRevolution first as cultural myth, then 1793, Terror, Vendée and counter-revolution
1815–1830sDumas, The Count of Monte Cristo*,**Napoleon’s return, Bourbon Restoration, Louis-Philippe
late 1820s / 1830Stendhal, The Red and the BlackRestoration society, Napoleon nostalgia, aristocracy versus bourgeois France
1815–1832Hugo, Les Misérables**Waterloo aftermath, poverty, policing, July Monarchy, June Rebellion
1860sZola, GerminalSecond Empire, industrialisation, mines, labour and class
1870–71Zola, La DébâcleFranco-Prussian War, Sedan, fall of Napoleon III, emergence of Third Republic
1914–18Henri Barbusse, Le Feu / Under FireFrench soldiers and trench experience in the First World War
1940–occupationIrène Némirovsky, Suite françaisecollapse of 1940, exodus from Paris, German occupation

It’s difficult for me to keep all of the Rois Louis in check. As the ‘What to hang it on’ suggests, the Three Musketeers reminds me of Louis XIII and Cardinal Richelieu, which leads to Louis XIV. The good thing about XIV is the geezer rules for 70 years, building the palace of Versailles in his tenure. It may not be high scholarship, but the Netflix show Versailles is my historical source for the middle of Louis XIV’s reign. Quite obviously, his son was Louis XV, the penultimate king, as Louis XIV, found his end at the guillotine in 1793, a few years after the start of the French Revolution in 1789.

As I write, I decided a film/small screen version would be nice, too. Here it is.

Approximate slotFilm / seriesMental hook
1572La Reine Margot (1994) **Wars of Religion, Catherine de Médicis, Henri de Navarre, St Bartholomew’s Day massacre
1620sThe Three Musketeers adaptations *,**Louis XIII, Richelieu
1640-ishCyrano de Bergerac (1990)*,**seventeenth-century France, literary/cultural rather than political anchor
1660s–70sVersailles**Louis XIV, court, absolutism
1671Vatel (2000)Louis XIV’s aristocratic court culture
1780sRidiculeLouis XVI’s Versailles, wit and patronage
1780sDangerous Liaisons **aristocratic libertinism, late ancien régime
1770s–1789Marie Antoinette (2006)Versailles immediately before the Revolution
1789–94La Révolution française (1989)broad Revolution narrative
Napoleonic eraNapoleon (2023)huge visual hook; history treated rather elastically
1815 onwardThe Count of Monte Cristo *,**Restoration France, post-Napoleonic world
1832Les Misérables **June Rebellion, July Monarchy
Second EmpireGerminal (1993)industrialisation, miners, labour/class conflict
1870–71La Débâcle, where available, or documentariesFranco-Prussian War, fall of Napoleon III
1914–18A Very Long EngagementFirst World War France
1940–44Army of ShadowsResistance and occupation
1940–45Un village français / A French Villageoccupied France at civilian scale

Please note that I can’t vouch for these, as I haven’t read or seen most of them – hence the ChatGPT inquiry. I liked the older version of Les Misérables film and The Count of Monte Cristo; The Three Musketeers wasn’t bad. I read Cyrano de Bergerac when I was 11 or 12 for school. I think it was fine. I think I watched Dangerous Liaisons in the late ’80s or early ’90s. I don’t recall that is was bad, so… Finally, there’s Versailles. I think it was on Netflix. It’s not particularly historically accurate, but it was decent enough.

Anyway, that’s all I’ve got for now. If you’ve got anything to add, including opinions, share them in comments.

* I’ve read these titles, Le comte de Monte Cristo in French
** I’ve watched this on video.

What am I reading?

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I discovered a WordPress widget and decided to share my reading progress, but it appears to show the last few books I’ve finished rather than my active list. Click on My Bookshelf to view more.

I read several books at once. I tend to read a fiction and several non-fiction books. The fiction books happens to be an audiobook, which I tend to listen to whilst I am working out: Carl’s Doomsday Scenario: Dungeon Crawler Carl (book 2). It’s more of a diversion – and entirely unserious, though I did find a quote on Understanding, my latest essay project still in progress.

I can’t really recommend a book to people because I don’t know their tastes and interests. As for the Dungeon Crawler series, if you like RPG gaming culture and lore, you may appreciate the humour of LitRPG. It’s stupid fun.

On the serious side, I’ve mainly been milking a few titles;

  1. Against Progress: Slavoj Žižek
  2. Reasons and Persons: Derek Parfit
  3. Being and Time, An Annotated Translation: Martin Heidegger

Against Progress is a short collections of essays that I tend to travel with and read an appointments and such. I’ve read almost half of them, but I’m still reading.

I’m very close to finishing Reasons and Persons. I’t not exactly a page turner, but it is engaging. It’s inspired several essays here, so I have to suggest that it’s worth the read, as long as it is.

I’ve read Being and Time before, but I wants to take a gander with this new translation and check out the annotations. Since I’ve already read it and have ideas about it, I am more critical of some of the early annotations than a fresh book, but this is also on a slow –when I have time – track.

Of course, one could argue that I would have time if I weren’t reading non-fiction, and one would be correct. However, the level of attention required differs significantly.

The Social Construction of Reality: A Treatise in the Sociology of Knowledge

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Somebody somewhere made mention of The Social Construction of Reality, so I asked ChatGPT if I should engage with it directly, which is to say, to read it. Already believing that what we perceive and experience is a subjective construction, albeit shaped by relative forces, I thought it might be a lot of choir preaching.

ChatGPT admitted that this was partially true, but that the benefit would be to get a sociological rather than strictly philosophical account. Having read the introduction and started the first chapter, I already feel this to be true. The authors make it clear that Sociology is just a special philosophy that doesn’t aim quite so deep and has a specific and obvious focus on societies. Fair enough.

So far, I’m glad I picked it up. It’s relatively short, which was a deciding factor, and it’s giving me a break from the 1066 material I’ve otherwise been consuming as of late.

I don’t have more to add, save to say, so far so good. I look forward to the rest. I’ve got more to do today, including editing a video for YouTube, which is me rather than AI for a change – a process that reminds me why I use AI in the first place: so much time investment.

NB: I am actually listening to an Audible version of this book. Whilst searching for an apt cover image for this post, I found the associated image, and it is as apt as one might find.

Un-Discovering America

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As Independence Day is upon the United States of America, I considered some counterfactuals. What if Europe fails to reach the Americas until a century or more late, and we watch the delay from the vantage of the peoples already here, going about the business of history without a Columbus to interrupt them? Then came the question everyone eventually asks about their own good ideas, in the tone of a man checking whether the milk has turned: has this been done before? Of course, it had been. Spoilers follow – sort of.

Audio: NotebookLM summary podcast of this topic.

The inversions

The oldest respectable relative is Robert Silverberg’s The Gate of Worlds (1967). A nastier Black Death carries off three-quarters of Europe rather than a third; the continent never recovers, the Ottomans move in, London becomes New Istanbul, and by the twentieth century the great powers are the Aztecs, the Incas, the Russians and the Japanese. Our guide is a young Englishman named Dan Beauchamp, who sails to an industrial, motorcar-driving Mexico to seek his fortune. Note the pronoun. The world has been turned upside down, and we are shown it by a European looking up.

Christopher Evans’s Aztec Century (1993), which took that year’s BSFA Award, runs the same reversal with more brass. Cortés changes sides, a New World plague scythes through Europe instead of the reverse, and the Aztec Empire swells into a technological superpower that eventually occupies Britain. The narrator is Princess Catherine, daughter of a defeated British monarch, Princess Diana watching London burn from the losing side. Again, the conquered European tells us what the conquest was like.

Laurent Binet’s Civilizations (2019) is the cleverest of the lot, and the most decorated – it won the Grand Prix du roman de l’Académie française, and Sam Taylor’s English translation took the Sidewise Award for alternate history. A stray band of Vikings gifts the Americas iron, horses and, crucially, immunity; so when Columbus turns up in 1492, he is captured and demoted to court jester, and the Inca emperor Atahualpa later sails east to conquer a Europe conveniently fractured by Luther, the Inquisition and its own dynastic squabbles. Binet is far too intelligent not to know what he is doing. The whole thing is a Civilization-the-video-game daydream executed with Académie française tailoring, and it is genuinely delicious. It is also, structurally, another inversion: swap the conqueror, keep the conquest.

The remix and the intervention

Two cousins change the machinery rather than the direction. Kim Stanley Robinson’s The Years of Rice and Salt (2002) empties Europe almost entirely – the plague takes ninety-nine per cent – and then spends six hundred sprawling, reincarnation-threaded pages letting China, Islam, India and the Indigenous Americas run world history without the Europeans in the room at all. It is less a mirror than a vast tapestry, and its ambition is precisely that Europe should not be the pivot. Whether it manages that, or merely relocates the pivot, is a question the book is honest enough to leave open.

Orson Scott Card’s Pastwatch: The Redemption of Christopher Columbus (1996) cheats, and admits it: time-travellers reach back to soften the catastrophe of contact. It is a book about first contact, disease and conquest, but the engine is intervention from a guilty future, which makes it a novel about us editing them, the colonial gaze wearing a lab coat.

The one that isn’t a mirror

And then there is B. L. Blanchard’s The Peacekeeper (2022) – also, tellingly, a Sidewise Award winner – which does the rarer thing and quietly refuses the whole game. There is no inversion here, because there is no conquest to invert. North America was simply never colonised. The Great Lakes are an independent Anishinaabe nation; Chicago is Shikaakwa; there are no borders on the map because the book declines to draw any. It happens to be a murder mystery, and a slightly wobbly one – I called the culprit early, as apparently did everyone – but the mystery is scaffolding. The real work is a society organised around restorative justice, redistribution and something the glossary calls the Good Life, where crime is repaired rather than punished, and the question ‘what is success?’ gets a genuinely different answer. That difference is the whole point, and it is worth spelling out.

The tell

Watch what the inversion novels are obliged to do to their winners. Silverberg’s Aztecs drive coal-fired automobiles. Evans’s Aztecs somehow have flying warships and space weapons, to the audible irritation of every reviewer who has ever met a history book. In each case, the counter-empire only counts as having won once it has industrialised, once it has, in other words, become Europe in a headdress. The measuring stick never leaves the room. It just changes hands. Would not recommend. All of these are still viewed through Modernist lenses. They can’t seem to help themselves.

This is the trap, and it is a grammatical one: you can swap every noun in the sentence and leave the syntax of conquest perfectly intact. Who dominates whom is a variable. That domination is the axis of the story remains fixed – invisibly, load-bearingly fixed. So the shelf keeps producing books that promise to dethrone Europe and instead install a differently-costumed emperor on the same throne, using the same yardstick to prove he deserves it. Europe gets decentred by being made the absent centre. Everything still orbits the hole where it used to be.

Blanchard’s book is the one that escapes, and it escapes not by putting someone else on the throne but by asking whether the throne needed to exist. That is a far harder imaginative act, which is exactly why the shelf holds so many mirrors and so few windows. Inverting a hierarchy is a parlour trick – satisfying, symmetrical, teachable in an afternoon. Imagining a world whose values diverged, so that its people would not measure their flourishing in territory and tonnage at all, requires you to invent the ruler before you can invent the thing it measures. Most writers, sensibly, decline the extra labour.

Six books, then, and a warning label. Read Binet for the wit, Blanchard for the nerve, Silverberg for the ancestry, and the rest for the pleasure of watching very clever people not quite escape the room. Then, if you’re feeling brave, go and undiscover America properly, which means resisting the temptation to let it become us, wearing better feathers.

Les Années Vécues

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I’ve been working for days on a new short story that investigates time. I’ve already published The Box in English, but this new piece looks at a different aspect of time, one I suspect may work better in French because the grammar gives me more useful pressure points than English.

The working title is Les Années Vécues, which translates literally as The Years Lived. For now, that’s only a working title. Oddly enough, the purpose of this post is not really to describe the story, though I may do some of that. It is more about the tools, the process, and the strange route by which the idea arrived.

The story began as a conversation between me, Claude, and ChatGPT about human innovation and creativity. A colleague had recommended How Language Began. I bought it and read the first few chapters. For the record, it’s interesting.

Early on, the author discusses genetics and evolution, citing human inventions along the way, particularly those associated with Homo erectus. Because I tend to question narratives of progress, and especially grand claims around Innovation and Creativity, I fell into some LLM-assisted chit-chat. From there, the conversation drifted into time travel in fiction. We discussed tropes from Back to the Future to Outlander. Somewhere in that mess, I noticed a missing perspective I felt I could capitalise on.

For the record, again, I have not been especially successful at writing short stories. They tend to grow beyond my intent, usually into novelettes or novellas. My first novel, written as Ridley Park, began as a short story. That story is now ostensibly chapter five of Hemo Sapiens. It can stand on its own, but it plays better in context. It is still my favourite chapter, if I had to choose one. So I’ll see where this new one goes, if anywhere. Nowhere is always an option. The blank page remains admirably non-committal.

After hours of brainstorming with the LLMs, arbitrarily switching from French to English and back again, I had a plot outline with beats and flavour, tropes and intentions, subversions and misdirects. I had captured dialogue exchanges, worked through worldbuilding constraints, and fleshed out several plot points. Then I asked ChatGPT to build me a tracking document to serve as a punch list.

I’ve done this a few times before, but with the advancement of the tools, the output was surprisingly robust, arguably overkill, which isn’t always a vice.

The spreadsheet contains 9 tabs:

  1. Lists
  2. Dashboard
  3. Punchlist
  4. Beat Map
  5. Continuity Rules
  6. Motifs & Plants
  7. Evidence Ledger
  8. Open Questions
  9. Sources

Lists

The Lists tab is mostly internal to the spreadsheet. It controls status values, priorities, categories, and related dropdowns. I would not have made it this elaborate manually, but I’m not offended by competence when it arrives uninvited.

I wouldn’t have been so elaborate, but it’s nice nonetheless.

The Dashboard

The Dashboard is also a bit of overkill, but useful overkill. In its inaugural state, it gives a quick view of task status, priorities, and next actions. Its intent should be clear from the screenshot.

Punchlist

The Punchlist is essentially an actionable to-do list with status markers. I think I can safely share this without giving too much away. It lets me manage the story as a set of unresolved craft problems rather than as a vague cloud of ‘I should really get back to that’.

Beat map

The Beat Map contains representative story beats, with notes that capture narrative purpose, confidence level, and risk-management annotations. This is where structure can be managed without cluttering the prose draft itself.

Continuity Rules

The Continuity Rules tab captures worldbuilding constraints and adjacent considerations. It is probably oversharing at this stage, but I’ll take the risk. These rules matter because speculative fiction can collapse quickly when the premise starts leaking.

Motifs & Plants

The Motifs & Plants tab tracks recurring touchpoints, images, phrases, and planted details. Some of these may be premature, but having them outside the draft helps me avoid forcing them into the prose too early.

Evidence Ledger

The Evidence Ledger tracks what counts as evidence inside the story world, who can interpret it, and how it may be misread. This is another continuity check, but also a thematic one.

Open Questions

The Open Questions tab is exactly what it sounds like: unresolved choices, structural uncertainties, and decisions I do not yet want to freeze into place. Sometimes the most useful document is the one that refuses to pretend everything has been solved.

Sources

The Sources tab lists the chat history and documents from which the rest of the content was derived.

The Rest

This is only a partial listing, and I am not finished ideating. I have not yet begun the prose.

I do not always plot my stories. More often than not, I take something closer to a stream-of-consciousness approach. But for one thing, my consciousness does not stream in French. So there’s that.

What impressed me most was the organisational layer the LLM produced. The spreadsheet is now hosted on Google Drive as a Sheet, accessible to both me and the LLMs, so it can be updated as the discussions and decisions continue.

I’m looking forward to wrapping up the ideation phase and beginning, and ideally completing, the prose. That last part remains the traditional nuisance.

Klara and Identity

I’ve just finished reading Ishiguro’s 2021 novel, Klara and the Sun, and I was scripting a video review, but I wanted to focus on one aspect in particular.

I’ve published a full piece on Substack, but here are summaries and artefacts from YouTube and Spotify.

Audio: NotebookLM summary podcast of this topic.

Was Hobbes Right in Leviathan?

This is a NotebookLM podcast audio summary of a Substack essay on a key idea of Thomas Hobbes expressed in Leviathan.

Audio: NotebookLM summary podcast of this topic.

We all remember Hobbes. Not Calvin’s pet tiger, regrettably, but the Leviathan one: the cheerful fellow who looked at human beings and concluded that, left to themselves, they would make life ‘solitary, poor, nasty, brutish, and short’. A line so good it almost excuses the anthropology. Almost.

Read the full essay on Substack.